description: the first few weeks of term 4 we have been working on Prep witch is preparing for market day on friday the 11 of november 2016. We had a slide were we could write our ideas, thoughts and the things we would need. We had to work in groups of three m group was me, Harriet, Eila and Amanda. Amanda is a new student at russell street so we invited into our group.
this is our slide:
Tuesday, 8 November 2016
Description: A couple weeks a ago we did some end of year P.A.T tests and today we got our results from our math teacher James and in his group we are expected to be in the Stanine 7,8,9. So here is a picture of my result.
Description: these first few weeks of term 4 we have been working on persuasive writing, to persuade people to buy our product from market day this Friday. I worked on an radio ad with Emma O we sadly couldn't upload our ad so here is our script. We needed to make an ad about a small box and we could do anything to make it awesome!
Me:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
Me:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
Me:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS!
Feedback: Great script! I can tell your tone was really excited like!
Feedforward:Maybe next time you could be more dramatic about it!
Evaluation: I think Emma and I did well on making our ad persuasive but next I think we could add some humour to make it more interesting.