Tuesday, 8 November 2016

Persuasive Writing term 4

Description: these first few weeks of term 4 we have been working on persuasive writing, to persuade people to buy our product from market day this Friday. I worked on an radio ad with Emma O we sadly couldn't upload our ad so here is our script. We needed to make an ad about a small box and we could do anything to make it awesome!

Script:
Me:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
Me:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
Me:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS!
Both:BYEEEEEEE!

Feedback: Great script! I can tell your tone was really excited like! 
Feedforward:Maybe next time you could be more dramatic about it!

Evaluation: I think Emma and I did well on making our ad persuasive but next I think we could add some humour to make it more interesting. 


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