Here is my writing!
My goal for writing is precise nouns. Precise nouns are words describing the place that they are in, in this school.my main character of my comic strip is Alex treveny from a graphic novel called night school.
Evaluation: I think I could get better at putting more precise nouns in my comic page
But I think I did well on it making sense and giving out a good message!
Feedback/Feedforward:I like how you made a comic an its your own creation and it's different to normal comics people make. but I don't understand how it relates to your life and I think you need to make the pic bigger.